This is the recount that I did for my writing
On the first Monday and Tuesday of the holidays we went to the E.A Network pools in Ashburton. Before we went to the pool we went to drop my aunt and mum to the Jim. After that my cousin sister and I went to go pay for swimming. Then when we went to pay we went and got dress into our togs in the changing rooms. After we got change we went and swim I went in the deep pool.
When we finish swimming went and pick up my mum and aunt At the Jim they liked to lift the weight lifting. When they came out of the Jim they all looked sweaty and hot. Then we went to the shop and brought water cause they were hot. Then after that we went to pick up my aunt and mum and went back home.
I know this recount is little but this is what I did in the 2 weekend holiday.
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Well done Samicle, I like how you said we went to the E.A Network pools in Ashburton. I hope you keep doing that because you're really good.
ReplyDeleteI hope you comment on my blog well done.