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To do this we had to fine a partner and who ever we picked was our couch so then he or she would check
my writing and if I have something wrong then they
Rakaia Bridge
Last Friday me and my cousins and nephews and nieces drove to Rakaia Bridge and went camping.
First we drove off to where my cousins lives so she could get her camping stuff.
Before we drove off to my cousins house we were at my house and I was just begging my mum and dad if I could go to camp with them because I knew that they will say no but well I was begging they said “yes and I was like WHAT!” My mum and dad was like “yup sure” I said “oh okay so i’ll just get my stuff ready” after that I went outside and I was jumping around and then my brother came and disrupt me. He ask me what I was doing. I said “nothing why do you ask?” He said “oh for sure nothing you liar” I said “oh I heard that”
I am really sorry that my writing does not make science and I am trying to get it done and I i'm also trying to make it make science.
But thank you for reading my writing please leave a comment
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Hi Samicle, I enjoyed reading all your blogs. Would love to hear how you enjoyed camping at Rakaia bridge. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nikita for commenting on my blog i'm still working on my story and I like the way how you said you enjoyed reading the stuff that i'v been posting. Thank you!
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