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Wednesday, May 25, 2016

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

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               Scariest Day ever
It was a bright sunny day as I was going around the river bank with my family. It was December and  early morning. I could see a group of lions lying in the sun ready to pounce on my herd of buffaloes. I tried to keep close to my mother. But I know I am feeling threatened because they are going to get me first because I am weak!

The buffaloes are walking along the river bank. But then I said OMG! I can see a group of lions! I told my dad but he would not listen.I just kept telling him, but he could not hear me. His big feet were too big and he was making a lot of noise. Then I told my mother and she thought I was joking, but then she saw some of a group of lions. But then that is when my dad stopped and so did the herd of buffaloes. I know that is about to pounce on me because I am slow.    

1 comment:

  1. Nice story Samicle it so good i don't think i could do that ether.
    How did you came a good writer

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