5. Adverb Sentence:
We use it to add interest and intrigue.

Adverb (comma) sentence
Quickly, Curiously, interestingly, importantly, firstly, often, Almost, Remarkably, Similarly, significantly, Surprisingly, reading, Happily, Consequently

EXAMPLE- Surprising, Everone was at school on time.
firstly, I had to read this massive book.
Honestly, She was annoying.

11. W- start sentence
We use it to sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Who, While, Whilst, When, Where, What, Whereas.

EXAMPLE- While Siola was sing, I was playing the piano.
When I was cleaning, my sister where screaming.
When we were friends, She was Honestly annoying.

6: Begin With A Proposition

Proposition- a word that indicates location or movement.

In, on, at, between, against, over, under, before, after, 
behind, within, for, throughout, near, about, 

Example: Throughout the class, the students worked on there writing.


Between me and my mum, she likes my alder sister the most.

Against me my siblings, we fight a lot

Between me and  my family, we make our rules as we live

4. Red, White and Blue Sentence

Use this when you need to give more than one idea on the topic.

Example: The idea of racism is memorable

in 'The Merchant of Venice because 

of Shylock, Judaism, and conflict.

The essentials of rugby are kicking, possing, and tackling.

The main hits in volleyball are a spike, dig, and serve.

The main rules in netball are no stepping, no bouncing, and no contact.

Basic Introduction

Q/R 

Quote- from the text 

Rhetorical Question- a question you don't have to answer.

T- Title- The Merchant of Venice

A- Arthur- William Shakespeare

K- Key Argument- A key argument that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond.

O- Outline- The 3 things you are going to write about.

Red, White and Blue sentences. he was willing to die for money to give Bassanio. Shylock & Antonio hate each other. Shylock didn't show mercy.

"If you wrong us, shall we not revenge?! (Shakespeare-Shylok) Have you ever felt like taking revenge? In William Shakespeare 'The Merchant of Venice' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond. This moment was shocking, outrageous and fascinating. This moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond, Antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio, and Shylock did not show mercy in claiming his bond.


Basic Body Paragraph x3

P-Point- The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along.
E-Evidence- Antonio was a Merchant and Shylock made a living lending people money with interest. While Shylock charged interest, Antonio lent money without interest and scorned Shylock for doing so. He also spat at Shylock and called him "cut through a dog."
E-Example- (How the evidence prove the point)
Therefore, the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Shylock can come to an agreement about money lending. It is also shocking because when Shylock calls Antonio out for the way he teats him, Antonio tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again. This treatment is not unusual among people who make arguments.
L-Link-(Link back to my key argument)
With treatment like this from Antonio towards Shylock, and a promise to be just as cruel in the future, it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond


The reader was shocked when the reader read this part because of Antonio and Bassanio a really good friends in reality but who would put their lives in sacrifice for his best friend.